A breath long moment;
Logged, I waited
My breath to complete
It’s a breath long journey
It took years discreet.
Heart so filled, pouring;
With those starry eyes
You touched my soul
In one smile
My world consoled.
Timeless it was like a dream;
Or it shall truly be real someday?
After a shadow aghast I ran
A breath, no sign of you
Left me shunned.
Glimpse of you shone;
Or it was shadow of past
Or the future, or a precast
Attending every breath I was..
Readily I still was… till last.
Timeless you and me,
Inconspicuously creative;
We weave a castle by a thread,
Now or ever it doesn’t matter
Together we decipher the unsaid.
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Really good one chitra. Especially the last stanza
//Timeless you and me;
inconspicuously creative
we weave a castle by a thread
now or ever it doesn’t matter
together we decipher the unsaid//
I like these lines. Kudos to your creativity. Also the words “shun” & “shonned” … Hope not to miss your poems to improve my vocabulary
You mean shunned and shone.
Many thanks for appreciating Karthick.
This means a lot to me. Will keep sharing. 🙂
This one amazing one sis….. Keep it up…
And yes I agree with Karthik “each of ur creations increasing my vocabulary too” ….
God bless….
Thank you 🙂
Awesome!!
I am so proud of you 🙂
🙂 Thank you dear
it’s really beautiful
keep it up ☺
Timeless you and me;
inconspicuously creative
we weave a castle by a thread
now or ever it doesn’t matter
together we decipher the unsaid.
<3!!!
🙂 ❤