“Timeless you and me”


A breath long moment;

logged, I waited

my breath to complete

It’s a breath long journey

It took years discreet.

 

Heart so filled, pouring;

with those starry eyes

you touched my soul

in one smile

my world consoled.

 

Timeless it was like a dream;

or it will truly be real someday?

after a shadow aghast I run

a breath, no sign of you

leave me shunned.

 

Glimpse of you shone;

or was shadow of past

or the future, or a precast

attending every breath I was..

readily I still am … till last.

 

Timeless you and me;

inconspicuously creative

we weave a castle by a thread

now or ever it doesn’t matter

together we decipher the unsaid.

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9 thoughts on ““Timeless you and me”

  1. Really good one chitra. Especially the last stanza
    //Timeless you and me;
    inconspicuously creative
    we weave a castle by a thread
    now or ever it doesn’t matter
    together we decipher the unsaid//

    I like these lines. Kudos to your creativity. Also the words “shun” & “shonned” … Hope not to miss your poems to improve my vocabulary

  2. tunisiajolyn84

    Timeless you and me;

    inconspicuously creative

    we weave a castle by a thread

    now or ever it doesn’t matter

    together we decipher the unsaid.

    <3!!!

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