Beating
My heart slowed down
When I listened to whispers
Of conversation that heart had
With one’s disapproval’s child
Disagreed to disperse
Injected life in the wave indifferent
A particle of doubt was enough
To block its way to transcendent.
For my heart shrunk
It absorbed fluid
That only fed thoughts
Around its horizon
Emotional turbulence shook it
Shrinking it begot weaknesses
Distrust diffused toxins
Unkindness and distrust
Left the cubicle vacant.
A little friendly force
Unwanted thrust me hard
The urge to revive
Furrowed me deep
Dragged me from hallucination
Removed layers
From those eyes that filmed over
Haze, mist, sand, fog and
The clouds crescent.
That lighthouse
That saves the ship
With shine and warmth heals the holes
Clears the filth of stern and bow
Brings it back to sea floor
Lathers it spreads new vibes on old waves
Holding the vessel in tempest,
It mumbles to never quit and
To hold this “stillness” within, till the end.
'Soulful' 
I’m a lil confused ;p Hehe
Confused why?
I dunno I didn’t get the first part so well :p
The first part is the problem sparking in your brain when you notice the emotional imbalance in your heart due to outer forces (disapproval’s child denotes the increase(delta) in your emotional imbalance due to someone’s disapproval). And influenced you start being part of the bigger problem cycle. Does it help?
Yes yes got it now 🙋🙌😍😍😘 now it all makes sense. It’s awesome 😍
🙂 personifying objects and feelings attached to them is always interesting.
Yeah it is :3 I don’t get it sometimes Hehe my bad 🙏😋
🙂 I guess I must give some background to people before posting a poetry.
Not really :3 that’s not really necessary for readers 😀 just that I don’t fall into a reader category 😜
Guddie. ..nice
🙂
I love your poem and the way you related the feelings to the sea in the last stanza. Nicely penned! ⭐ Best wishes, Aquileana 😀
Hi Aquileana, thank you for your read. 🙂 I am.glad that you loved it. :))
Each roll they laugh
Every pitch they breath
Seconds to live and years to wait
And still remains discussions with
destiny till d end…..
🙂