once upon a time,
when I never had met you before…
I used to live in a place ever seen..
where the trees and the flowers,
and the moon and the stars,
danced with streams,
waterfalls and the lake ..
where the birds and bees
used to twirl and sing,
taking break…
where souls from the world
of the most divine ..
floated to earth …
to rest
from the bottom deepest
released their energies ..
with their magic outbreak..
where they built, of wonders
A world…
unknown to the most ..
that one could not see
with the material eyes ..
the untouched soil,
the unsung words,
the unheard music,
the unseen life ..
I witnessed, I touched
As an integral, interwoven
part of the craft
All I assure I was..
in almost near to a dream
bloomed every bud made me feel
there I was always..full of life
full of zeal
Apart ..
once it broke
like I was out of a spell cast
when I jumped from the crest
fallen to a test
the hardest quest ..
the day I saw me turning plastic eyes
metal witnessed gravity
of sinful magma
human greed
loveless chest
with I fought everyday,
I tried to return ..
couldn’t revive
survived,
till the day I saw you…
in this new world of unknown
I could bet
I was a piece of a craft
A mannequin ..
turned dark to sun
dummy in transition to skin
lending life to the dead
curvy smiles creating pits
on those cheeks
like the shiny pink river in my land streaks
mesmerized I walked on
after..what I had had a glimpse of,
from the day I had felt my heart..
have never dreamt..
never felt..
never believed on.. a fact
or a lie..
that I never had met you before…
..
Its great lizzy bt idk smtyn b missin ha
missing what sankar?
Sankar .. I dont know why this was unclear for u but for I made a few words change in this song to make it more explanatory.. can check and give me your feedback..
🙂 ^_^ maybe i was just lost or felt smtyn 🙂 still its grt ❤
I liked these lines. seems these are real lines happening to most of us ..
“once it broke
like I was out of a spell cast
when I jumped from the crest
fallen to a test
the hardest quest ..
the day I saw me turning plastic eyes
metal witnessed gravity
of sinful magma
human greed”
Loved the way this is expressed poetically…
I can only thank you to read and appreciate .. your minute inspection really makes me happy 🙂
Well done.. dear..
Keep going..