every word fell..
from your mouth
jammed me head to roots
stared.. I refused to move
so easy was to say..
for you
…
Was it the word?
spinning in your mind
from a long time
wobbled in your stomach
stuck at throat
what stopped you so long..
confusion faded trust
and warmth
Little did I know
your will
was to say it ..
what made other thing
unnoticed
unseen ..
turned you unchangeable
..
no eye clutched
saw you turning
and disappearing
like Sun hides
laying dark effects on
a shiny day..
just by saying
.. a word
..
‘GOODBYE’
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This is painful! Really~
Not sure if this happened in real life or it is a created scenario.
Hope the other side of the pain gonna be fantastic and peaceful! Anything can turn back…
Lets us hope for the best luck!
This is so good .. stirred my inner thoughts!
I am sorry for all painful words I used here.. real or dramatic, situation is painful.
It differs from person to person… dramatic for one can be real for the other… cant say..
To dig out soul is the sole purpose of Soulful.
Thanks all for liking it.
awesome words linked together ..that filled my heart with emotion
i like this lline “”no eye clutched
saw you turning
and disappearing””
keep righting 🙂 we will keep reading 🙂 its a promise 🙂
Thanks Ashutosh 🙂
I will keep writing 🙂
although epitome of these lines are sad but everyone will find oneself connected to it.Simple yet engaging 🙂
@Kaushal Thanks for liking it 🙂
nice but it seems , its half side of the coin !!
a monologue always is one sided expression ..
Lizzy :* nothing to say freaking awesome
Thanks a lot Sankx 🙂
yeh 😀 ❤
Poignantly beautiful!
Thanks for reading and liking it. 🙂