I started,
feeling blue..
…
cold waves
nerves down
frozen blood
broken warmth in pieces
dreadful cloudy weather
fearful stormy winds
blew me away ..
to a barren frozen land
thrusting me
heartbeats complained
panting I denied breathing
but had to
it did freeze body moist to depth
With frozen tissues and blood..
I walked on..
slipping and sliding snowy sheets ..
trying to hold on
couldn’t keep me warm
it choked me to dumb
it made me..
a stone stucking in the standstill snow
dying every second..
feeling dizzy.. impossibly alive
..
hey!
wait a minute..
Don’t you dare to give me that
same cold look again!
you know what,
I started..
feeling blue
..
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Liked the way you used the vocabularies here.
Liked these lines
“I walked on..
slipping and sliding snowy sheets ..
trying to hold on
couldn’t keep me warm
it choked me to dumb
it made me..
a stone stucking in the standstill snow
dying every second..
feeling dizzy.. impossibly alive”
and
“frozen blood
broken warmth in pieces
dreadful cloudy weather
fearful stormy win” .. Loved the way it is stated here.
Best is
“thrusting me
heartbeats complained
panting I denied breathing”
Perfect realistic feel… Also the picture weaves the emotions as well..
Now I started..feeling blue 🙂 Way to go
whooooh thanks for admiring the way each and every word I used here .. 🙂
It is not that everyone gets the creativity unless they try 🙂 ..As you are passionate, you would get all the credits from everywhere 🙂 ATB
I wish. Thanks :))
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wah lizzy kewl \m/ ❤ i'm feelin blue
you always feel blue sanx :d … bdw thanks for reading it na..
blue :O 😛 yeh 😀 ❤ np dumie
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