So discouraging..
…
you see
your closed ones
Judging you
very moment .. you try to be just you
their wit dies..
You crossed your lines, showed your instincts
You are judged a stupid character
A kind criminal
You will be in prison – of rules…
Rules they made – many of’em
you are bound to be quiet
Each and every word you speak,
will be used against you
how can you chose to be innocent and stupid before them?
How?
How could you?
They are the Closest-one,
chosen-one, loved-one
And you behaved stupidly?
Strange.
What happened to their being of known-one
Why don’t they get you?
Is it a sign of
knowing nothing about you?
or a sign knowing nothing about anything?
They kept witnessing
your abilities,
and dis-abilities
forever and …
now they question who are you.
Why are you like this?
What is your type?
do you answer?
Why do you need to show ?..
every while ..
everywhere that
YOU TOO ..
..have a way out
..have a vision of life
..can see world with your glittering eyes
..have dreams
..have a past, present and future
..have a soul
..can judge but you don’t..
and YOU TOO is a child of Him
Him,
the holiness of all, the most sacred of all
the most loved and worshipped
the almighty
….
..
No rituals before him.. no need to act..
He never judges,
loves you for who you are
He created you to learn
see the world with His eyes..
He blesses you.. He pours his power on you..
each and every action of yours
is..
a live proof of His being and
blessing..
you are not wrong
when you chose to be JUST YOU
Iisten to your heart … Its no crime
its just you..
loving and caring
an image of your pure soul,
HIS pure soul..
…..
….
so discouraging
while you forget this fact
…
thanks for reading and liking 🙂
It is good. You have taken a hard situation and did your best in developing a poem. I guess the length could have been reduced because that the feel gets scattered somewhere in the middle.
Liked these lines “and YOU TOO is a child of Him
Him,
the holiness of all, the most sacred of all
the most loved and worshipped
the almighty
”
Lines of these kind “how can you chose to be innocent and stupid before them?” makes the poem to have the feel of prose.
Liked it.!
What’s next?
thanks for reading it.. i know it could have been reduced.. i actually wanted to increase length of positive thoughts … so that one can feel that within and can take that time length to excel to a level up… 🙂
Wish I could post a few good lines in the next posts 🙂