do you know?
why do you love to live in dream?
yes, you do.
after a rugged day
a day like an year long..
you feel like
scrubbed…
chopped, crushed,
dragged to your bed..
all you want to close
you eyes..
every day you pretend to forget the pain
by closing your eyes?
everything you are tired to hold
do you really want
to let it slip every day?
from your hand
each responsibility, every single duty
all boundaries.. and every limit
do you really want to cross?
yes, you do.
how?
Unfinished dreams
waters, blue and deep
you sink in and forget everything real..
every emotion and desire
that frame another world
more real than the one exists
more beautiful,
more convincing
attracting..
…
your crimson heart
pumps up joys to your body again..
mind filters satisfaction from..
every work finished in the unknown world
every laughter, shine and glory
of the dream..
do you know this will be blown away?
Soon..
just like wind?
do you?
yes, you do.
still the thirst ..
for the unknown and unreal glory
that forces you ..
to finish up and laid down
even the worst of the day
its passes on.
and you smile
finishing your supper
like you know
what job is next to be done..
and you know what?
yes, you do…
…
Amazing work dear 🙂
thanks 🙂
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This is super cool. Read it thrice..
#you sink in and forget everything real..
every emotion and desire
that frame another world
more real than the one exists
more beautiful,
more convincing
attracting..##
Pleasing lines! #
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every emotion and desire
that frame another world ///// loved it >>>Many likes<<<
Very true. Emotions and desires frame a virtual world which accommodates the real "ourselves" that is the place we should be living in or at least I wish to be.
That brings in some pain if we realize we don't own what we dreamt.
I absolutely appreciate the points you use here "Emotions and desire frame another world, World of dreams rather a "Wanna be world' I prefer.
I am very much in reading about dreams intact i read about oneirology some time back…and now loved the words "Emotions frame the world". Perfect!
Thanks a lot first! I understand a fact which urges me to read more!
Thumbs UP dear!
First of all thanks for reading and loving this piece. 🙂 secondly I would love to know more from you about oneirology.. 🙂
And Karthick.. thanks for understanding it the way I written it thanks a lot 🙂 🙂