Listening to me??
i said ..
wait !!
hey come on.. dont quit at this time..
you are about to reach..
may be
Hey wait!!
listen m not sure
but still you should wait for a few more time…
don’t go
stop..
please don’t..
no.
…….
..
silence!
…now
heart feels vibrated
nerves feel cold
mind filled with blank
loosing brains
control
..
Alas you would have listened to me
we would have been together
it was just two steps away from my feet..
we had to gather
we had to walk a few steps together
you had to wait
for a little longer
Alas!
..
..
now alone
without you
m feeling hesitant
or most of the times
hasty..
..
when i lost the most awaited..
..moment of success
just because you left me..
i couldn’t survive..
i was just a few minutes,
just a few steps,
just a few more umphs
away from ..the winning touchdown
you lost yourself
and left me
…
failed ..
..
.
I missed you..
sometimes you come
sometimes you go..
can’t you hold for my tough time??
a little more..
when i need you the most..
??
will you ??
..
my dear ‘PATIENCE’
…
will you??
hey?
..
listening to me??
'Soulful' 
lovely! its going with ma current phase in life….
thanks Sujata 🙂
you know what it belongs to everyone , when i was reading this its like “you are toking about me “.Nice way to express your feelings towards life.I hope your PATIENCE will listen you and you will win over the tensed thought’s which is running in your mind.:)
Hey…Itzzzz wonderful…. 🙂
Thanks anamika 🙂
yeah anamika wndrful hai =))
andy :O …thanx
Hehe Good one CHitzz..
i can Very well construct a stroy behind it XP
Feels lighter to read this! and also like talking to a friend!
Yeah patience and perseverance are the two best friends I ever could have 🙂
I wish patience “hold you embraced” forever @ Nice read!
ha ha .. thanks for this wish.. I also wish for my patience holding me embraced .. I need that 🙂