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the light in the sky was not you ..
if not you and not me then who or what is gleaming outside..
when i feel you here inside..
yes its you strengthening roots of the wood ..
all its you discovering smile..
trying to console my mind
and my soul
deepening love
sowing courage
digging heart land
making me sleep when i feel alone in the darkest nights
when i try to escape, you hold me embraced
no its you filling in me
power to fight
drying my tears
shadowing from sunlight
showing torch when there is no moon light ..
yes its you to gleam all in me and my beside
yes you to gleam inside and outside…
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😀 \m/
thanks sanky 🙂
awesm……both r really nice
thanks 🙂
ahaan romancing !! achi hai 🙂
#when i try to escape, you hold me embraced.. this line is good . For the contextn people commonly use “You embrace me” but combining the word “hold” and “embrace” adds some expressions to it. Simlle choice and \many likes/
Also this :
yes its you to gleam all in me and my beside
yes you to gleam inside and outside…
could have been replaced with Yes, It is you gleam all in and around me ??? I’m not sure 😛
Any specific reasons to have used ?
Good one! “YOU” !
thanks for your minute inspection.. 🙂 loved it.. And yes, i had to be poetic using that line 😀 … dint try to get it edited though..:D bDW thanks a lot 🙂
the specific reason might be … i wanted it to express through the action not just the emotions… beside, inside and outside.. when u spell the words, you imagine urself looking here there, and finding where the expression fits best… there u exactly know how it feels when it gleams … hope it is explained …