to gleam…



..

the light in the sky was not you ..

if not you and not me then who or what is gleaming outside..

when i feel you here inside..

yes its you strengthening roots of the wood ..

all its you discovering smile..

trying to console my mind

and my soul

deepening love

sowing courage

digging heart land

making me sleep when i feel alone in the darkest nights

when i try to escape, you hold me embraced

no its you filling in me

power to fight

drying my tears

shadowing from sunlight

showing torch when there is no moon light ..

yes its you to gleam all in me and my beside

yes you to gleam inside and outside…

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8 thoughts on “to gleam…

  1. #when i try to escape, you hold me embraced.. this line is good . For the contextn people commonly use “You embrace me” but combining the word “hold” and “embrace” adds some expressions to it. Simlle choice and \many likes/

    Also this :

    yes its you to gleam all in me and my beside

    yes you to gleam inside and outside…

    could have been replaced with Yes, It is you gleam all in and around me ??? I’m not sure πŸ˜›

    Any specific reasons to have used ?

    Good one! “YOU” !

    1. the specific reason might be … i wanted it to express through the action not just the emotions… beside, inside and outside.. when u spell the words, you imagine urself looking here there, and finding where the expression fits best… there u exactly know how it feels when it gleams … hope it is explained …

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